Click Here to read the story in its entirety! If you don't have the password—or you lost it somewhere—then you can send me an email through the dialogue box below and I'll send it to you.The final segment to my raw draft is up:
I'm excited that it's finished, at least for now. I'll probably let it breath for a little while and then try to return to it with a fresh mind in a little while. I already have some ideas and strategies for fixing the broken parts, strengthening the characters, and helping it to resonate a little bit more. I'm not saying this is going to be the best work of fiction ever to see the light of day, but it will certainly be the best that I have ever written.
The other exciting part of finishing is that now I get to go back to working on other things, and working on getting better. I'll have more stuff to post here, since I won't be spending all of my writing time on this one thing. Onward!